Dear F.S Diary,
Last week
in forest school we had to build bridges. We had to create mini bridges and
large bridges. The mini bridges had to hold a toy dinosaur. The large bridge
had to hold a teacher. Most of the bridges held the teachers some didn’t. There
was also gardening we had to paint the borders.
By Jodie
4CF
5 comments:
1. We really like your blog post because we thought it was extremely interesting.
2. We 're quite concerned about the teachers stood on bridges that didn't make it. What happened to them?
3. To make this even better, we think you could try to vary your sentence structure. Why not try to use different sentence openers? For example:
First, we had to create mini bridges...
Thanks Year 5! What a constructive comment for us! I can confirm no teachers were harmed in the making of this lesson! :D We would love to comment on your blog, could be have the web address?
thank you for that comment that really made us improve with our wrighting skills
That's really cool! It's sounds really fun! I will totally try that! Kawaii~Neko
Thank you year5 that has helped me a lot with my handwriting and my literacy!!
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